Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Listen carefully and answer the examiner's question directly. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then give one or two specific supporting details (age, how often you rode it, a short memory). Use linking words if you add details (for example, "when I was about seven" or "because"). Keep your answer natural, concise (no more than 4–5 sentences), and avoid repeating the question.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because my parents lived close by, I felt safe cycling around the neighborhood, and I remember learning to ride without training wheels in the park.

제안: Answer the question directly with a clear opinion, then expand with specific and relevant details. Mention what types of bikes are popular (e.g., motorcycles vs. bicycles), reasons for their popularity (cost, convenience, fuel efficiency), and use linking words (such as "because", "for example", "however") to make the response coherent. Avoid grammatical errors and short, unclear phrasing—use complete sentences.

예시: Yes, I think motorcycles are very popular in Pakistan. For example, models like the Honda 150 are common because they are affordable, fuel-efficient, and easy to maintain. As a result, many people prefer motorcycles for daily commuting and small businesses, especially in crowded cities.

× Yes, in my country Pakistan Honda 150 is popular by.

✓ Yes, in my country Pakistan, the Honda 150 is popular.

The phrase 'popular by' is incorrect; English uses 'popular' without 'by' in this context and requires the definite article 'the' before a specific model name. Also a comma is needed after 'country Pakistan' for clarity (or reorder to 'in Pakistan' to avoid comma). Suggestion: say 'In Pakistan, the Honda 150 is popular.' This fixes preposition misuse and article omission.