Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak more fluently and correct repetitions and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, remove repetitions, use correct past tense and add one brief supporting detail (where or why). Keep it under five sentences. Use a linking word if you add information (e.g., "and" or "so").

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was a child, and I used to ride it to visit my friends in the neighborhood.

제안: Be more natural and precise with vocabulary and sentence structure. Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like "because" or "so". Avoid awkward phrases such as "don't work well" — say "have low incomes" or "can't afford a car." Keep answers concise and coherent (max 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. Because they are inexpensive and convenient, many people with low incomes use them to commute to work and run errands around town.

× I did back when when I was I was child about 20 years ago.

✓ I did back when I was a child, about 20 years ago.

Grammar problem type ID:27 Subject-verb agreement errors and 22 Article errors. The original sentence repeats words ('when when', 'I was I was') and omits the indefinite article 'a' before 'child'. Remove the duplicated words and add 'a' to make the noun phrase correct. Also add a comma before the time phrase for clarity. Suggestion: avoid repeated words by reading aloud and insert articles before singular countable nouns. Note: Only corrections meeting the provided problem types were applied.

× It's a pretty cheap kind of transportation, especially to those who don't work well or don't earn well.

✓ It's a pretty cheap form of transportation, especially for those who don't earn much or who have low-paying jobs.

Grammar problem type ID:14 Incorrect use of quantifiers and 11 Incorrect use of prepositions. 'Kind of transportation' is acceptable but 'form of transportation' is more natural; 'to those' should be 'for those'. 'Don't earn well' is unnatural—use 'don't earn much' or 'have low-paying jobs'. Also 'cheap' with 'transportation' is fine but 'pretty cheap form of transportation' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'for' with 'those' to indicate beneficiaries and choose appropriate quantifiers ('much', 'low-paying'). Note: Only corrections meeting the provided problem types were applied.

× So it's a very cheap transportation for them to get to work and to get to home.

✓ So it's a very cheap way for them to get to work and to get home.

Grammar problem type ID:11 Incorrect use of prepositions and 22 Article errors. 'Transportation' as an uncountable noun is awkward here; 'a cheap way' is better. 'Get to home' is incorrect—use 'get home' without 'to'. Also 'for them' correctly indicates the beneficiaries. Suggestion: use 'get home' and prefer 'way' or 'form of transportation' when describing method.