Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and use correct tense, sentence structure and linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details (who, why, special features). Avoid repetition and fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles, word order). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child, which my sister and I shared. Our grandmother bought it for us as a reward when we did well at school, so it always felt special. It even had a small basket on the front where I kept my schoolbooks.

제안: Give a clear opinion with reasons and specific examples, use correct grammar and linking words (however, because, for example). Avoid repetition and vague phrases like "sort of." Use plural/singular correctly and keep answers concise (2–3 sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular, especially among children and students, because they are cheap to run and good for short trips. However, they can be expensive to buy for some families, so not everyone owns one.

× Yeah, I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about possession in the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the verb should be in the past tense. Use 'had' instead of 'do have' to match the past-time context. Suggestion: always match verb tense to the time frame in the question.

× When I was a child me and my sister shared it.

✓ When I was a child, my sister and I shared it.

The subject pronouns are in the wrong order and case. Use 'my sister and I' (subjective case) instead of 'me and my sister', and place 'I' last for polite style. Also add a comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: use subject pronouns and conventional ordering 'X and I'.

× It was given to us by our late grandmother.

✓ It was given to us by our late grandmother.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change required. It correctly uses the passive voice and the pronoun 'us'.

× She bought it for us as a reward when we achieved or get honors at school and we it's why it has basket on front.

✓ She bought it for us as a reward when we got honors at school, and that's why it has a basket on the front.

Multiple issues: tense consistency (use past 'got' not 'get'), choose one verb ('achieved' or 'got') and remove 'or', fix clause connection ('and that's why'), add article 'a' before 'basket', and include 'the' before 'front' or use 'the front' to be natural. Also fix contraction/wording 'we it's why' to 'that's why'. Suggestion: keep past events in past tense, avoid mixing forms, and ensure correct articles and clause connectors.

× I think bikes are sort of popular in our country.

✓ I think bikes are quite popular in our country.

The original is acceptable but 'sort of' is informal and vague; 'quite' is clearer. Tense is fine (present) because it's a general statement. This is a stylistic improvement rather than a strict grammatical correction. Suggestion: prefer clearer adverbs in formal responses.

× A lot of kids uses it, love to ride bikes since it doesn't use any fuel.

✓ A lot of kids use them; they love to ride bikes since bikes don't use any fuel.

'A lot of kids' is plural, so the verb should be 'use' not 'uses'. Pronoun agreement: 'it' is singular but refers to 'bikes' (plural), so use 'them' or rephrase. Also 'doesn't use any fuel' should be plural 'don't use any fuel' when referring to bikes. Suggestion: ensure verbs and pronouns agree in number with their subjects.

× However, it is also it also comes a little pricey and not everyone can afford it, so yeah.

✓ However, they can also be a little pricey, and not everyone can afford them.

Repetition 'it is also it also' is incorrect. Use plural 'they' to refer to bikes, and 'a little pricey' requires 'be' (can be a little pricey). Also keep pronoun number consistent: 'them' to match 'they'. Remove 'so yeah' for formality. Suggestion: avoid repetition and keep pronouns/verbs consistent in number and form.