Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the grammar and make the response natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, how you used it). Use past tense for childhood and linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle my parents bought for me, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon.

제안: Give a direct, specific opinion and support it with concrete reasons or examples. Use linking words (however, because, for example) to make your answer coherent and avoid hesitation fillers like “uh.” Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

예시: Not very popular, in my experience. Most people prefer cars or motorcycles because they are faster and more convenient for long distances; however, bikes are becoming more common in cities for short commutes and leisure activities.

× Yes, I have a bike when I want a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the student must use past tense. 'Have' should be past 'had' (present tense vs past tense issue). Also 'when I want a child' is incorrect: 'want' is present and the intended meaning is 'when I was a child.' Use 'was' for the past state. Suggestion: use past simple for both verbs when describing past situations: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× No, not that much, but, uh.

✓ Not that many, no, but they are not very common where I live.

The short answer 'No, not that much, but, uh.' is incomplete and ungrammatical. The intended meaning is about how popular bikes are (countable plural 'bikes'), so use 'not that many' rather than 'not that much.' This is a sentence structure and quantifier choice issue: provide a full clause to answer the question. Suggestion: give a complete sentence: 'Not that many; they are not very common where I live.'