Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the tense consistent and start with a direct topic sentence. Give one or two specific supporting details and use a linking word to connect them. Avoid short grammatical errors (e.g., use past simple: "I had" not "I have") and reduce redundancy.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, my mother bought it for me when I was three years old, and I remember being very excited because it had bright red training wheels. As a result, I learned to balance early and rode it every afternoon.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid fillers like "uh". Use correct plural forms and a linking word to introduce a specific reason or an example. Provide one concrete detail (where or when you see them) to support your view.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, I often see large numbers of bicycles on city streets and bike lanes during rush hour, especially near schools and markets, which shows many people prefer cycling for short trips.

× Yes, I have. When I was three years old my mom gave me a bike so I was so happy.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was three years old my mom gave me a bike, so I was very happy.

The examiner asked about a past possession: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' The student answered 'Yes, I have,' which uses present tense and wrong auxiliary. Use past tense auxiliary 'did' for short answers to past questions (Grammar Problem Type ID: 5 Past tense issue and ID: 27 Subject-verb agreement errors are related but the primary error is past tense/auxiliary). Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'so' and use 'very happy' instead of 'so happy' for clearer formality. Suggestion: Use 'Yes, I did' for short positive answers to 'Did...' questions and match verb tenses in the rest of the sentence.

× Yes, I do because uh, actually we have many bike in the street when I go out.

✓ Yes, I do because, uh, actually we see many bikes in the street when I go out.

The noun 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') after 'many' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1 Singular and plural issue). Additionally, the original 'we have many bikes in the street' is slightly unnatural: 'we see many bikes in the street' or 'there are many bikes on the street' would be better. Also use preposition 'on the street' rather than 'in the street' when talking about vehicles present along streets (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11 Incorrect use of prepositions). Suggestion: Use plural nouns after quantifiers like 'many' and prefer 'see many bikes' or 'there are many bikes on the street.'