Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and accurate, use correct words, and organize your response into a brief topic sentence plus one or two specific details. Avoid filler sounds and long unclear phrases. For example, say you did or did not have a bike, give a reason or a memory, and mention a specific age or event. Use linking words like "however" or "because" if needed.

예시: I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I really wanted one and asked for it for my 7th birthday because many of my friends were riding around the neighbourhood. I remember feeling left out when I watched them, which is why I wished for a bike so much.

제안: Give a clear direct opinion first, then support it with one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Use linking words such as "because", "for example", or "however" to make your point coherent. Mention whether popularity varies by city, age group or purpose (commuting, leisure), and briefly explain why.

예시: I think bikes are not very popular in my city, mainly because the roads are busy and many people prefer cars. For example, when I was a child few families used bikes and my sister stopped riding after she had an accident, which made my family more cautious about cycling.

× No, I didn't have a Pike, but I really do love to have one, specifically when I am umm on my elementary taste.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but I really would have liked to have one, especially when I was in elementary school.

Multiple issues: 'Pike' is a misspelling/word choice error — should be 'bike' (noun). 'I really do love to have one' is unnatural for past desire; use 'I really would have liked to have one' to express a past wish (modal/past-tense meaning). 'specifically when I am umm on my elementary taste' is ungrammatical: wrong tense and word choice. Use 'especially when I was in elementary school' to match past time. This correction adjusts word choice, tense (present to past), and article/phrase to be natural. Applicable grammar problem type IDs: 22 (Article errors) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× And I also wish for it to receive on my 7th birthday.

✓ And I also wished to receive one on my 7th birthday.

The sentence uses present tense 'wish' and passive 'receive' incorrectly for a past event. Use past tense 'wished' and active infinitive 'to receive one' or better 'to receive one' with subject implied. Also 'it' is unclear; 'one' refers to 'a bike'. This aligns tense and clarifies the object. Applicable grammar problem type ID: 5

× Umm, I believe it depends, but in my country and or in my city it wasn't since I have remem.

✓ Umm, I think it depends, but in my country or in my city it wasn't very common, as far as I remember.

Problems: 'I believe it depends' is acceptable but 'I think it depends' is more natural. 'and or' is incorrect coordination; use 'or'. 'it wasn't' needs an adjective (e.g. 'very common') to make sense. 'since I have remem' is incomplete and wrong tense; use 'as far as I remember' for recalling. This fixes conjunction use, sentence structure, and tense. Applicable grammar problem type IDs: 16 and 26

× I'd remember that during my childhood my sister's got into an accident.

✓ I remember that during my childhood my sister got into an accident.

'I'd remember' is incorrect: contraction 'I'd' (I would/I had) doesn't fit; use simple past 'I remember' or 'I remembered' depending on intended meaning — here 'I remember' (present recall) is appropriate. 'my sister's got into an accident' mixes contraction 's (has/is) with past tense; correct is 'my sister got into an accident.' This addresses verb tense and incorrect contraction/auxiliary use. Applicable grammar problem type IDs: 5 and 27