Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct, grammatically correct response and include 1–2 brief supporting details. Use past tense for childhood and avoid unnecessary questions back to the examiner. Keep it natural and within 1–2 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a small apartment and my parents preferred that I play near home rather than ride a bicycle.

제안: Your answer is relevant and gives specific reasons and an example, but improve grammar (e.g. 'workers'), use linking words for cohesion, and avoid minor errors. Keep sentences concise (max 5) and vary vocabulary slightly.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short journeys. In addition, they are environmentally friendly, so many people choose them for commuting. For instance, I often see groups of students and workers cycling to school and work every morning.

× No. When I am younger then no. Why?

✓ No. When I was younger, no.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was younger'), so the past tense should be used for the verb 'to be'. 'When I am younger' is present tense and incorrect for a past reference. Also 'then' is mistakenly used; use a comma or 'then' only if comparing two past moments. Suggestion: say 'No. When I was younger, no.' or better, 'No. I did not have one when I was younger.'

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are cheap and practical for short trips.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are cheap and practical for short trips.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. It uses adjectives 'cheap' and 'practical' correctly to describe 'bikes'.

× Many people use them to go to work or school.

✓ Many people use them to go to work or school.

This sentence is correct. The plural subject 'Many people' correctly takes the base verb 'use'. No change needed.

× For example, I often see groups of students and works riding bikes in the morning.

✓ For example, I often see groups of students and workers riding bikes in the morning.

The word 'works' is incorrect here. 'Work' as a noun usually refers to tasks or a place; to refer to people who work, use 'workers' (plural noun). This is a singular/plural and word-choice error. Suggestion: use 'workers' to refer to people going to their jobs, or say 'people who work'.