Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, use correct tense, reduce repetition, and give a clear brief reason. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then add one supporting detail using linking words. Fix grammar: use 'didn't have' instead of 'don't', 'ride a bike' instead of 'drive a bike', and avoid stuttering or repetition.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. As a result, I never learned to ride, so I would usually run or walk with my friends instead.

제안: Give a concise opinion, correct pronunciation and word choice, and add a specific example or reason with a linking word. Replace 'Bite' with 'Bikes', avoid filler words like 'umm', and use connectors such as 'because' or 'for example' to support your answer.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes. For example, I often see students and office workers cycling to school or work in the mornings.

× No, I don't. That's why I I didn't know how to to drive a bike or zoom to, to do bike or even if you came out, I didn't know about that.

✓ No, I didn't. That's why I didn't know how to ride a bike or go out cycling, and even if you invited me to come out, I wouldn't have known what to do.

The student mixes present and past tenses and uses incorrect verbs. The question asked about childhood (past), so replies should use past tense (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). 'I don't' should be 'I didn't'. 'Drive a bike' is incorrect; use 'ride a bike'. 'Zoom to, to do bike' is ungrammatical; replace with 'go out cycling'. The phrase 'even if you came out' is confusing; change to 'even if you invited me to come out' and use conditional 'wouldn't have known' to indicate past inability. Suggest practicing consistent past tense and common collocations like 'ride a bike' and 'go cycling'. This addresses tense consistency and verb choice.

× Yes, I think so. Bite is popular in our country and I go out, I usually see other people riding a bike and umm, I think it's very quiet amazing because it's still popular in this country.

✓ Yes, I think so. Bikes are popular in our country, and when I go out I usually see other people riding bikes. I think it's quite amazing that they are still popular here.

Multiple issues: singular/plural and adjective/adverb choice. 'Bite' is a mispronunciation/typo of 'bikes' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). Use plural 'Bikes are popular'. 'I go out, I usually see' is awkward; combine clauses with 'when I go out I usually see'. 'Very quiet amazing' misuses 'quiet' instead of 'quite' and 'very quite' is incorrect; use 'quite amazing' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13). Also maintain consistent reference 'they are still popular here'. Recommend checking plural forms for nouns and using 'quite' as adverb meaning 'rather'.