Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), correct verb forms, and avoid filler sounds. Use one or two supporting reasons with proper grammar (past tense) and linking words to connect ideas. Keep answers under five sentences and include a brief specific detail (age or situation) to make it natural.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I was too afraid to ride because I couldn't keep my balance at the time. As a result, I learned to ride much later, when I was about twelve, with help from my older cousin.

제안: Answer directly and use clear sentence structure. Begin with a topic sentence (Yes/No or a short opinion), then use linking words (however, but, although) to add contrast. Provide a specific example or brief explanation about who uses bikes and what is more common (e.g., motorbikes). Avoid hesitations and repeat words.

예시: Bikes are not very popular as a main transport mode in my country. However, they are quite common among children for play and learning. In contrast, motorbikes are the most popular form of transport for adults because they are faster and more convenient for commuting.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a try because umm, I was so afraid of drive a bike because I can't.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was so afraid of riding a bike and I couldn't.

The student used incorrect words and tenses: 'try' should be 'child' (word choice), 'afraid of drive a bike' should use the gerund 'riding' after 'afraid of', and 'I can't' should be past tense 'I couldn't' to match 'didn't have' and 'was'. Use past tense consistently for past situations and use gerund after preposition 'of'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense and 'verb + -ing' after 'afraid of'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I could not keep balance when I try a bike so.

✓ I could not keep my balance when I tried to ride a bike.

The original sentence mixes past modal 'could not' with present 'try'. After 'could not' describing a past ability, the action should be in past tense: 'tried'. Also 'try a bike' is incorrect collocation; use 'tried to ride a bike'. Include the possessive 'my balance'. Suggestion: match past tense verbs and use 'try to ride' or 'tried to ride'. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Is not a popular vehicle but is this UMM is popular for child for children in my country, but the most popular vehicle is a motorbike.

✓ Bicycles are not a very popular vehicle, but they are popular for children in my country; the most popular vehicle is the motorbike.

The original sentence has word order and structure problems: missing subject ('Is not' should be 'Bicycles are not'), redundant and unclear phrases ('is this UMM is popular for child for children'). Use plural 'bicycles' and plural pronoun 'they' to refer back. Use 'for children' not 'for child'. Also include the definite article 'the' for 'motorbike' when referring to the general class: 'the motorbike' or simply 'motorbikes'. Suggestion: form clear clauses, use correct subject-verb order, and consistent plural forms. Grammar problem type ID: 1