Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid unrelated words (e.g., 'baseball') and correct verb forms and articles: say “I used to have a bicycle” or “I had a bike.” Use linking words like 'but' correctly and keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I rode it to school and to a nearby park almost every day. However, now that I am an adult I no longer own a bike because I usually commute by bus.

제안: Answer directly, then give a specific reason and an example. Correct repetition and grammar (remove duplicate words and use present continuous or simple present correctly). Use a linking word like 'because' and add a concrete detail (who uses bikes, for what, in which places). Keep it concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many children and students use them to travel to school. For example, in my neighborhood you can see lots of kids cycling on weekday mornings, and some adults also use bikes for short trips to the market.

× When I was a child I used to have bicycle, but now I become adult I don't have any baseball.

✓ When I was a child, I used to have a bicycle, but now that I am an adult I don't have one.

Errors: 'have bicycle' misses an article and plural/singular agreement (should be 'a bicycle'); 'become adult' is incorrect verb form and missing article — use 'am an adult' (present simple for current state); 'any baseball' is wrong noun choice and article — likely meant 'a baseball' or 'one' depending on meaning. Suggestions: add commas for clarity, use 'a bicycle' for a single item, use 'now that I am an adult' for current state, and replace 'any baseball' with 'one' or 'a baseball' depending on intended meaning.

× I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many kids are are using bicycles.

✓ I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many kids are using them.

Errors: Repeated word 'are are' is a typographical/redundant auxiliary error and should be a single 'are'; using 'bicycles' again at the end is unnecessary and less natural — use the pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition. Also 'many kids are using them' is present continuous and appropriate for ongoing action. Suggestions: remove the duplicated 'are' and replace the repeated noun with the pronoun 'them' for conciseness.