Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn đã sai hoàn toàn về từ vựng và phát âm trong câu trả lời. Cần chú ý: (1) Dùng từ đúng (bike ≠ pie; child ≠ chill). (2) Trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi thay vì lặp lại câu hỏi. (3) Cấu trúc câu nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. (4) Giữ độ dài tối đa 5 câu và sử dụng từ nối nếu cần.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a blue bicycle from the age of six, which I rode to school every day. It was a simple, sturdy bike with a basket, and I remember fixing the chain with my father once. Because of that bike, I learned to be more independent and confident.

제안: Bạn chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi với thay đổi nhỏ nên không trả lời được nội dung. Cần: (1) Trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No/maybe) với câu chủ đề. (2) Cung cấp lí do cụ thể và ví dụ để minh hoạ. (3) Dùng từ nối để liên kết ý (for example, because, therefore). (4) Tránh lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. Many people use bicycles for short trips because they are cheap and convenient. For example, students and office workers often cycle to work or university to avoid traffic jams.

× Did you have a pie when you were a chill?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the wrong words: 'pie' instead of 'bike' and 'chill' instead of 'child'. This is a vocabulary/word choice error rather than a specific grammatical rule from the provided list, but it also affects sentence meaning and structure. Suggestion: listen carefully to the examiner's words and practice minimal pairs and common childhood vocabulary. Check each key noun for correct spelling: 'bike' and 'child'.

× Do you think your bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Using 'your' implies the bikes belong to the listener, which changes the meaning; the examiner asked about bikes in general in the country. This is an incorrect use of a possessive pronoun and sentence structure. Suggestion: remove the possessive 'your' when asking about general popularity; use the plural noun 'bikes' without a possessive for general statements.