Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and possible wrong words (e.g. “the bag, my children”). Give a short direct response, then one or two clear supporting details. Use correct past tense and simple vocabulary. Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so” if you add reasons.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it to my friend’s house and to the park almost every day because we didn’t have a car. It was a small red bike and I remember practising tricks with my friends on weekends.

제안: Your answer shows the right idea but is grammatically incorrect and lacks clear structure. Start with a direct opinion sentence, then add a specific reason or example. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “so” to connect ideas, and correct present simple forms (e.g. “many people ride bikes”). Keep responses concise and natural.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work. For example, in the cities you can see commuters cycling in the morning to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× Yeah, I did the bag, my children.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

Student used incorrect words and pronouns ('the bag, my children') that do not answer the question. The examiner asked about having a bike; the correct response uses past tense 'had' or the short form 'I did' plus a clarifying clause. Suggestion: answer directly with 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' Keep pronouns and nouns relevant to the question.

× You really think back there that is popular because in country many people riding bike go to work.

✓ Do you think bikes are popular there? In my country, many people ride bikes to go to work, so they are popular.

This utterance has multiple problems: incorrect pronoun and demonstrative use ('back there that'), missing articles ('in country'), wrong verb forms ('riding bike'), and awkward sentence structure. According to the allowed correction types, the main issue is incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure. Corrections: use 'there' or 'in my country' for location, use article 'my country' or 'the country', use base form 'ride' after modal/statement for habitual action, and include 'to' in 'ride bikes to work'. Suggestion: split into two clear sentences, keep subject and verb agreement, and use 'ride bikes' for plural/general habit.