Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is correct but too brief. Give a short topic sentence and one or two supporting details (where you used it, who gave it, or a memory) using linking words to make it natural and informative. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I rode it around the neighborhood every afternoon. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I learned to ride without training wheels within a week.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has hesitation, repetition, and grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting reasons and a short example. Use linking words (for example, furthermore) and correct tense. Keep it concise (no more than five sentences).

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. For example, in my hometown many people commute to work by bike because it is inexpensive and helps avoid traffic; moreover, cycling reduces air pollution and is good for health.

× Yes, I think so because, uh, usually in my hometown they use, they used to go, uh, to their jobs with bicycle so, and it's so beneficial for them to reduce, uh, pollution and, umm, traffic.

✓ Yes, I think so because usually in my hometown people used to go to their jobs by bicycle, and it's very beneficial for reducing pollution and traffic.

Multiple grammar problems are present: incorrect verb choice and tense mixing ('they use, they used to go' mixes present simple and past habitual) which falls under 'Present tense issue' and 'Past tense issue'; incorrect pronoun/reference ('they' is vague) and word choice 'with bicycle' is incorrect preposition use. According to the provided list, apply: 6: Present tense issue and 5: Past tense issue and 11: Incorrect use of prepositions. Corrected sentence uses a consistent tense ('used to' for habitual past) or could use present simple if habit continues. I replaced 'they' with 'people' to be clearer, changed 'with bicycle' to 'by bicycle' (correct preposition for transport), removed filler words (uh, umm) and adjusted 'so beneficial for them to reduce' to 'very beneficial for reducing' for natural phrasing and correct verb form. Suggestion: decide whether the habit is current (use 'usually people go') or past (use 'used to'), use 'by' for modes of transport, avoid filler words, and keep verb tenses consistent.