Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a slightly longer, natural response that includes a brief reason or detail to make the answer more informative and fluent. Start with a direct topic sentence, then use a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so") and provide a specific reason or short example. Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences).

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school or took the bus, and I sometimes borrowed a cousin's bike on weekends.

제안: Make the answer more specific and natural by adding supporting details and a linking phrase (e.g., "because", "for example"). Mention where or among whom bikes are popular and give a brief reason or comparison. Keep it concise and use relevant vocabulary (e.g., commuting, students, leisure).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in our country because many people use them for commuting in cities. For example, students and office workers often cycle short distances to avoid traffic, and there are also many bike-sharing schemes in large towns.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

No correction needed: the sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses past simple negative 'didn't have' to match the past time frame 'when I was a child.' No sentence-structure error present.

× Yes, in my opinion bikes are popular in our country.

✓ Yes, in my opinion bikes are popular in my country.

Change 'our country' to 'my country' to match the speaker's perspective and the question context. The verb 'are' and tense are correct (present simple) for a general statement. Use 'my country' because the speaker is referring to their own country; 'our' could be acceptable if the examiner is included, but 'my' is more precise for this personal opinion.