Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your tense and grammar accurate, start with a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, use past tense for childhood and add a brief detail about the bike.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six, and I rode it to a friend’s house every afternoon. Because it was lightweight and easy to control, I learned to balance quickly and stopped using the training wheels by the end of that summer.

제안: Use correct subject-verb agreement and plural forms, answer directly, then give a specific reason or example using a linking word. Avoid absolute statements unless you can support them. Keep it concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, in my city you can see parents cycling with their children to school and many neighbourhoods have bike lanes that encourage daily riding.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used the present tense 'have' with a past time expression 'when I was a child'. This is a tense mismatch. Use the past simple 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: Use past simple for actions or states completed in the past (I had, I lived, I played).

× Yes, bike is a popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The sentence has several issues: missing plural on 'bike', incorrect use of the definite article 'a' before 'popular', and subject-verb number mismatch. The correct general statement uses the plural noun 'bikes' and the plural verb 'are', and 'popular' does not take an indefinite article here. Suggestion: For general statements about a category use plural noun + are + adjective (Bikes are popular).

× Every children had a bike.

✓ Every child had a bike.

The phrase 'every' requires a singular noun, so 'children' is incorrect after 'every'. Use the singular 'child'. Also, because the time is past, use past simple 'had' which is already present. Suggestion: Use 'every' + singular noun (every child, every student).