Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答过于简短，缺乏细节和连贯结构。根据评分规则，应先用主题句直接回答，然后用1–2句支持细节，如描述自行车的外观、使用频率、记忆或原因等，并使用连接词使表达更自然。举例说明：可以提到什么时候有的、谁给的、最喜欢的一次骑行经历或为什么喜欢骑车。注意句子不超过5句，避免重复简单“yes”。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used it almost every day to ride around the neighborhood. I especially remember learning to ride on a quiet street near our house, which made me feel very independent.

제안: 回答过于简短，缺乏具体说明与理由。应先直接回答，然后提供1–2句具体理由或例子，例如讨论城市骑行习惯、公共共享单车的普及程度、环保与经济因素或在不同人群中的受欢迎程度，并使用连接词如“because”或“for example”。同样保持不超过5句，语言自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I do. Bicycles are very popular, especially in cities, because many people use shared bikes for short trips and commuting. For example, I often see office workers and students cycling to work or school to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

该句对前一问（过去时）作出简短肯定回答，语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

该句对一般现在时的问题作出简短肯定回答，语法正确，无需修改。