Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You misunderstood the examiner’s question and mispronounced or used the wrong word (“pipeline” instead of “bike”). Give a direct, short answer (Yes/No) with a simple topic sentence and one supporting detail. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences). For example, start with “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” then add a brief detail such as who it belonged to or how you used it.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

제안: Your answer tries to express an opinion but has grammar and word-choice errors and lacks clear linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence expressing your opinion, then add a specific reason and an example. Use linking words such as “because” or “for example,” and correct grammar (e.g., “many people use them”). Keep to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and workers cycle to school or work to avoid traffic and save money.

× Did you have a pipeline when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the word 'pipeline' which is semantically incorrect in context; the examiner asked about a bike. This is a word choice/meaning error rather than grammar, but it creates an incorrect sentence structure relative to the question. Suggestion: use the intended noun 'bike' to match the question and maintain clear communication.

× These bikes are popular in our country because it does of many people use.

✓ Bikes are popular in our country because many people use them.

The original sentence has several problems: incorrect subject form ('These bikes' is acceptable but unnecessary), incorrect and ungrammatical use of 'does of', missing object pronoun for 'bikes', and wrong word order. The corrected sentence uses simple present tense (are popular, use) to describe a general truth and includes the correct object pronoun 'them'. Suggestions: 1) Use simple present for habits/general facts. 2) Avoid adding extraneous words like 'does of'. 3) Ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents (use 'them' for plural 'bikes').