Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, tense consistency and fluency. Give a direct answer in past tense, use correct articles and pluralization, and add one supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it concise (max 3–4 short sentences). For example, say whether you had one, why or why not, and a brief memory or consequence.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school. As a result, I became used to walking long distances.

제안: Work on natural phrasing, vocabulary and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add a specific reason and an example using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "for example"). Avoid unclear phrases like "first quality of the youngster."

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students and workers use bicycles to avoid traffic and save money.

× No, I don't have bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time reference 'when I was child'. Use past simple 'didn't have' for past events. Also 'bike' needs the indefinite article 'a' and 'a child' requires the article 'a'. Suggestion: use 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Of course, bike is the first quality of the youngster.

✓ Of course, bikes are the most common choice among youngsters.

'Bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally. 'Youngster' is usually plural 'youngsters'. Also the phrase 'first quality of' is unidiomatic. Use 'most common choice among' to express popularity. Suggestion: use plural nouns and natural collocations: 'bikes are the most common choice among youngsters.'

× This is a very popular in my country.

✓ Bicycles are very popular in my country.

'This is a very popular' is ungrammatical because 'popular' needs a noun ('popular' is an adjective). Also 'a' cannot be used before 'popular' alone. Replace 'This is' with a clear subject 'Bicycles' and use plural to match general statement. Suggestion: say 'Bicycles are very popular in my country.'