BikePart 1 채점 보고서

모의고사Part12026-06-21 02:51:03

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Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

I think, uh, it sure, uh, popular in my country at the past year, but right now it's not publish.

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총점

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 85.0

제안: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır fakat çok kısa. Cümleyi biraz genişleterek kısa bir ilave yapmalısınız (örneğin ne tür bir bisiklet olduğunu, ne sıklıkla sürdüğünüzü veya kimden aldığınızı belirtin). Ayrıca bir başlangıç cümlesiyle soruya net cevap verip ardından bağlaçlarla ek bilgi verin.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it every weekend in the park with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 40.0

제안: Cümledeki dil bilgisi hataları ve belirsiz kelime kullanımı anlaşılmayı zorlaştırıyor. Zaman ifadelerini doğru kullanın (e.g. "in the past" veya "recently") ve yanlış kelimeleri değiştirmelisiniz ("publish" yanlış; doğru kelime muhtemelen "popular" veya "common"). Ayrıca dolgu kelimelerden (uh) kaçının. Daha net bir görüş cümlesi kurun ve ardından nedenini bağlaçlarla açıklayın.

예시: I think bicycles were more popular in my country a few years ago, but they are less common now because more people prefer cars and public transport.

문법

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think, uh, it sure, uh, popular in my country at the past year, but right now it's not publish.

I think, uh, it was certainly popular in my country last year, but right now it's not popular.

The sentence contains multiple errors: 1) 'it sure, uh, popular' is incorrect adjective/adverb use and missing a linking verb — use 'was certainly popular' to add the past tense verb and correct adverb. 2) 'at the past year' is incorrect preposition and noun choice — use 'last year' for correct time expression. 3) 'it's not publish' incorrectly uses a verb where an adjective is needed — use 'not popular'. Overall corrections: use past tense 'was' for the time reference 'last year', replace informal filler with the adverb 'certainly', use 'last year' instead of 'at the past year', and use the adjective 'popular' after 'is/was'. Suggestions: remove extra fillers, ensure a linking verb (is/was) before adjectives, use 'last year' for past-year references, and use adjectives (popular) rather than verbs (publish) when describing popularity.

중요 어휘

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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