Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with tense and expand your answer. Use past tense for childhood ("I had"). Give a brief supporting detail (where or how often you rode it) and keep it natural and concise. Also avoid single-word replies.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to a nearby park almost every afternoon, which helped me stay active and make friends.

제안: Provide a clear opinion and specific reasons, use linking words and correct word choice. Avoid hesitation sounds and unclear words like "price" if you mean "bicycles" or "public transport". Keep it to 1–3 sentences and add a specific example or evidence.

예시: Yes, I do. Bicycles are becoming more popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips, especially in crowded cities; for example, many people use bike-sharing services to commute to work.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past simple. The student's response uses the present perfect 'I have,' which is a tense mismatch. Use past simple 'I did' or 'Yes, I had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: reply in past simple ('Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike').

× Yes, I I do. Uh, in my country, uh, price is more popular.

✓ Yes, I do. In my country, bicycles are more popular.

The original contains a repeated word ('I I'), filler sounds ('Uh'), and an unclear noun 'price' likely intended as 'bicycles' or 'motorbikes.' Also 'is more popular' is singular and mismatches a plural subject. The question asks about general popularity in present simple, so use present simple 'are more popular' with the plural subject 'bicycles.' Suggestion: remove fillers, correct the noun to the intended item, and ensure subject-verb agreement ('bicycles are').