Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Sai ngữ pháp và từ vựng gây hiểu nhầm; câu thiếu trôi chảy, lặp từ, và một số từ dùng không đúng (ví dụ: "bailed" thay vì "bought/paid for", "I used I used" lặp, "dry" vô nghĩa ở ngữ cảnh). Đề xuất: (1) Sử dụng động từ chính xác và tránh lặp từ; (2) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể; (3) Dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý, giữ tối đa 4 câu. Ví dụ chỉnh sửa câu: “My parents bought my first bike when I was four. I often rode it to my friend’s house and to a nearby park every afternoon. Riding helped me learn balance and gave me a fun way to play with friends.”

예시: My parents bought my first bike when I was four. I often rode it to my friend’s house and to a nearby park every afternoon. Riding helped me learn balance and was a fun way to play with friends.

제안: Câu trả lời hiểu được nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc (ví dụ: "people... rides" phải là "people... ride", câu cuối lủng củng: "which make them keep it and stay healthy"). Đề xuất: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng; (2) Dùng thì và số phù hợp; (3) Thêm ví dụ cụ thể và một lý do ngắn để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn; (4) Giữ 2–3 câu. Ví dụ chỉnh sửa: “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips. I often see commuters riding in the mornings and students cycling to school. It’s popular because cycling is cheap and good exercise.”

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips. I often see commuters riding in the mornings and students cycling to school. It’s popular because cycling is cheap and good exercise.

× Yes, my parents bailed for me the first bike ever when I was four years old.

✓ Yes, my parents bought my first bike for me when I was four years old.

ID 5 & 27: 'bailed for me' is incorrect verb choice; the correct verb is 'bought' for purchasing. Also word order should be 'bought my first bike for me'. Use past simple 'bought' to match the past time 'when I was four'. Suggestion: replace 'bailed for me' with 'bought my first bike for me'.

× I used I used it to go to my friend's house or go to the gym every afternoon when I was dry.

✓ I used it to go to my friend's house or to the gym every afternoon when I was young.

ID 6 & 26: The phrase repeats 'I used I used' which is a repetition error; remove the duplicate. 'Go to the gym' needs parallel structure using 'to' before both verbs: 'to go to my friend's house or to the gym'. The word 'dry' is incorrect in context; likely meant 'young'. Maintain past habitual with 'used to'. Suggestion: remove duplicate, add 'to' for parallelism, and replace 'dry' with 'young' or another appropriate age descriptor.

× Yes, absolutely. I often see people in my country rides their bike on the street, especially in the morning or in the afternoon, which make them keep it and stay healthy.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I often see people in my country ride their bikes on the street, especially in the morning or in the afternoon, which helps them stay fit and healthy.

ID 27 & 5: 'people ... rides' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; with plural subject 'people' the base verb 'ride' must be used. 'Their bike' should be pluralized to 'their bikes' for naturalness. The relative clause 'which make them keep it and stay healthy' is ungrammatical: 'which helps them stay fit and healthy' is clearer—'helps' agrees with the singular noun phrase 'which' referring to the activity. Also 'keep it' is unclear; use 'stay fit' or 'stay healthy'. Suggestion: use plural verb 'ride', plural noun 'bikes', and rephrase clause to 'which helps them stay fit and healthy'.