Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For Part 1, give a direct, concise answer (1–2 sentences) and then add 1–2 supporting details using linking words. Make sure total length stays under five sentences and language is natural. For example, start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then add a reason or a brief memory using words like "because," "so," or "when."

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was eight because my parents wanted me to be active, and I rode it every day around the neighborhood until I was twelve.

제안: Good direct answer and relevant supporting details. To improve, make the response more fluent and concise: fix small grammar issues and unclear phrasing, use a linking word to connect ideas, and add one specific example or brief statistic to strengthen your point. Keep it within five sentences and vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., "commute short distances" → "commute short distances").

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children ride them to school because it's cheap and convenient, and many adults who commute short distances prefer cycling to avoid traffic and save money; for example, in smaller towns you can see entire streets filled with cyclists during rush hour.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

The original repeats the examiner's question as the student's answer, producing a sentence-structure problem (answer expected, not repetition). Convert to a simple past declarative sentence to answer the question. Use 'When I was a child' at the start for natural word order and 'had' as the correct past-tense verb.

× Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children ride them to school because it's cheap and convenient, and the number of adults, especially those who live in smaller towns or commu short distance, choose bikes for work to avoid traffic and save money.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children ride them to school because they are cheap and convenient, and many adults, especially those who live in smaller towns or a short distance from work, choose bikes to avoid traffic and save money.

This sentence contains multiple structure and word-choice problems. Use 'they are' instead of the contraction 'it's' which is singular; 'bikes' requires plural pronoun 'they' (subject-pronoun agreement). Replace 'the number of adults' with 'many adults' for natural phrasing. Fix the fragment 'commu short distance' to 'a short distance from work' to complete the thought and place modifiers correctly. Use 'choose bikes to avoid traffic' rather than 'choose bikes for work' for clarity.