Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer direct, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) then give one or two specific reasons or details. Use correct verb tenses and simple linking words (because, but, so). Avoid repetition (don’t repeat "when I was a child").

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. My mother didn’t allow me to ride one, so I only used a bicycle at home under her supervision. Also, at that time there were strict rules in Thailand about children riding bikes near busy roads, which made it difficult for me to ride outside.

제안: Answer directly and improve grammar and word choice. Use a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason and an example. Replace casual "yeah" with "Yes" and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

예시: Yes, bikes are becoming quite popular in my country because they help people avoid heavy traffic, especially in Bangkok. For example, many commuters use bicycles or motorbikes for short trips to work or the market, and cities are adding more bike lanes to accommodate them.

× I don't have any bike when I was a child, but I have only the bicycle when I was a child because my mom wasn't allow me to ride the bike and it was illegal in Thailand to ride the bikes when you.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child; I only had a bicycle because my mom didn't allow me to ride it, and it was illegal in Thailand for children to ride bikes.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: The sentence refers to the past, so present tense 'don't have' and 'have' should be past 'didn't have' and 'had' (Present tense issue ID 6). 'Wasn't allow' is incorrect passive/verb form; it should be 'didn't allow' (Past tense issue ID 5) or 'wasn't allowed' (verb in the past participle form ID 9). Also 'any bike' is wrong collocation for countable nouns in past negative; use 'a bike' (Singular and plural issue ID 1). 'Ride the bikes when you' is incomplete and unclear; I corrected to 'for children to ride bikes' to match meaning. Suggestion: Keep all verbs in past tense for past stories, use correct past forms (didn't + base verb) or the passive with past participle, and use 'a' with singular countable nouns.

× Yeah, it is popular in my country because there are a lot of traffic jams in my country, especially in Bangkok, so people tend to use bike in the city.

✓ Yes, bicycles are popular in my country because there are a lot of traffic jams, especially in Bangkok, so people tend to use bikes in the city.

Pronoun and noun choice issues: 'it is popular' is vague; replace with 'bicycles are popular' to refer to the subject clearly (Incorrect use of pronouns ID 12). 'Use bike' is uncountable/incorrect; use the plural 'use bikes' (Singular and plural issue ID 1). Also repeating 'in my country' is redundant; remove repetition. Suggestion: Refer directly to the noun (bicycles) and match singular/plural forms consistently.