Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear. Start with a simple topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (age, who gave it to you, how you used it). Use correct tense and short, natural sentences. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words like “when” or “and” correctly.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was eight years old, and I rode it to visit my friends and go to the park. It was a small blue bicycle with a basket, which made it very useful for short trips.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and clearer vocabulary (e.g., “popular,” “during the pandemic,” “mode of transport”). Keep answers concise and structured: opinion + reason + brief example.

예시: Bikes are not very popular in the Philippines overall. However, during the COVID-19 pandemic they became more common because people avoided crowded public transport and needed an affordable way to travel. For example, many commuters started cycling to work for safety and convenience.

× Yes, I think I have a bike when? Plus eight-year, eight years old.

✓ Yes, I think I had a bike when I was about eight years old.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with a past time reference 'when' and the speaker's childhood; use past tense 'had'. Also the time expression is ungrammatical; correct form is 'when I was about eight years old.' Suggest improving by keeping tense consistent with the time reference and using a clear age phrase.

× Here in Philippines bikes is not doing that popular like other party but when it was pandemic bike was a bit popular because of the transportation.

✓ Here in the Philippines, bikes are not as popular as other modes, but during the pandemic bikes were a bit more popular because of transportation needs.

Multiple errors: 'Philippines' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Bikes' (plural) requires plural verb 'are' not 'is' (subject-verb agreement). The phrase 'not doing that popular' is incorrect; use comparative structure 'not as popular as'. 'Other party' is incorrect word choice; use 'other modes' or 'other forms [of transport]'. 'When it was pandemic' is incorrect phrasing and tense; use 'during the pandemic'. Maintain past tense 'were' for the pandemic period. Suggest revising for article use, subject-verb agreement, correct comparative structure, and clearer vocabulary.