Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence saying whether you had a bike, then add 1–2 specific supporting details (colour, who gave it, where you rode it). Use correct tense and simple linking words if needed. Keep it under 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my older brother gave me as a birthday present. I used to ride it around our neighbourhood every afternoon, which helped me feel independent and active.

제안: Answer directly and explain reasons with clear grammar and linking words (because, so). Be specific about alternatives people use (cars, buses, motorcycles) and mention one or two reasons (short distances, good roads, public transport). Keep it concise and coherent.

예시: Not really. Because my country is small and distances between towns are short, most people prefer cars or motorcycles for convenience. Also, public transport is affordable and frequent, so biking is less common for daily travel.

× Yeah, I have a bike. It's red bike on the IT transfer from the city by him.

✓ Yes, I had a bike. It was a red bike that he brought from the city.

Tense and structure: The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense (had, was, brought) rather than present tense ('have'). Article and relative clause: 'It's red bike' is missing the article 'a' and should be 'It was a red bike.' The phrase 'on the IT transfer from the city by him' is ungrammatical; likely intended meaning is that someone brought the bike from the city, so use the relative clause 'that he brought from the city.' Suggestions: Use past simple for events in the past, include articles before singular countable nouns, and express origin with 'brought from the city.'

× No, I didn't think that 'cause my country is is small and easy to travel from the point to point that make people depend on a car or the musical to transfer from.

✓ No, I don't think so, because my country is small and it is easy to travel from one point to another, which makes people depend on cars or public transport.

Tense and agreement: The question asks generally about bikes' popularity, so present tense 'don't think' is appropriate rather than past 'didn't think.' Repetition and verb agreement: The sentence contains 'is is' (duplication) and 'that make people' which should be 'which makes people' to agree with singular 'country.' Word choice and prepositions: 'from the point to point' should be 'from one point to another.' 'The musical' is incorrect for transport; likely meant 'public transport' or 'buses/trains.' Suggestions: Use present simple for general statements, remove duplicate words, ensure subject-verb agreement ('which makes'), use correct phrases for movement ('from one point to another'), and choose correct vocabulary for transportation ('public transport' or 'buses').