Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Focus on clear grammar, correct vocabulary, and concise structure. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common errors: 'bike' not 'bite', use past tense consistently ('I didn't have a bike' or 'I didn't have one'), and fix subject-verb agreement. Reduce hesitation words (umm, uh) and avoid redundancy.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were worried about road safety. For example, there were no safe cycle paths near our home, so they preferred I walk or use public transport. As a result, I only learned to ride a bike when I was a teenager.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and a brief example. Use plural/singular consistently ('bikes are', 'in my country') and correct articles ('a lot of air pollution' or 'high levels of air pollution'). Use linking words like 'because', 'also', 'for example' to make your answer coherent. Aim for two to three sentences total and avoid repetition.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because there is limited cycling infrastructure and few dedicated bike lanes. Additionally, high traffic congestion and air pollution make cycling less appealing for many people. For example, most commuters prefer motorcycles or cars since the roads are unsafe for cyclists.

× Well, I will say that to be honest, I didn't have a bite when I were a child because my parents worry about the safety and they thought that umm, leading children to, uh, letting children bite on the road is quite.

✓ Well, to be honest, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents worried about safety and they thought that, umm, letting children ride bikes on the road was quite dangerous.

Errors involve past tense and incorrect word choice. 'I will say that to be honest' is awkward in past narrative; 'to be honest' alone is sufficient. 'Didn't have' is correct past tense but 'bite' is a wrong word: should be 'bike'. 'When I were a child' has incorrect verb form for past singular subject; use 'was'. 'My parents worry' uses present tense but the context is past, so use 'worried'. 'Leading children to, uh, letting children bite on the road is quite' combines fragments and wrong verb 'bite' and lacks an adjective; correct to 'letting children ride bikes on the road was quite dangerous.' Suggestion: when describing past events, keep verbs in past tense and choose accurate vocabulary (bike, ride). Use simple, clear clauses and avoid filler phrases that break tense consistency.

× Well, to be honest, I would say that a bike is not popular in my countries because of the infrastructure problems.

✓ Well, to be honest, I would say that bikes are not popular in my country because of infrastructure problems.

Errors: number agreement and incorrect noun form for country. 'A bike is not popular in my countries' wrongly uses singular article with plural 'countries' and mismatches intended meaning. The general statement about popularity should use plural 'bikes are not popular' and singular 'my country' if referring to the speaker's nation. Also 'the infrastructure problems' can be 'infrastructure problems' without 'the' when speaking generally. Suggestion: match subject and verb number and use correct singular/plural nouns for clarity.

× Umm, there is no lane for bike in my countries.

✓ Umm, there are no lanes for bikes in my country.

Errors: 'there is' with plural idea and noun forms. 'No lane' implies singular but context needs plural 'lanes' or at least 'a lane' per road; 'bike' should be plural or use 'a bike lane'. Also 'my countries' is incorrect; use 'my country'. Use 'there are' for plural countable nouns. Suggestion: use 'there are no bike lanes' or 'there is no bike lane' depending on context, and keep 'my country' singular.

× Moreover, there is umm, there are a lot of air pollution in my.

✓ Moreover, there is a lot of air pollution in my country.

Errors: mixed 'there is' and 'there are' and incomplete noun phrase. 'Air pollution' is an uncountable noun, so 'there is a lot of air pollution' is correct, not 'there are a lot of air pollution'. The sentence also ends abruptly with 'in my.' Replace with 'in my country.' Suggestion: for uncountable nouns use singular 'there is' and 'a lot of' to indicate quantity; complete place phrases (in my country).