Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: The answer is not relevant to the question and lacks structure, detail and coherence. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence about whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (when you got it, how often you rode, who taught you) using linking words such as "Yes, I did" / "No, I didn't" and "because" or "for example." Keep the response natural and within 3–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my birthday when I was eight and rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. Because I practiced a lot with my older brother, I became quite confident riding on busy roads.

제안: The reply is too short, vague, and does not directly answer the question. Improve by stating your opinion clearly (e.g. "Yes, they are popular" or "No, they are not"), then support it with specific reasons or examples and linking words such as "because", "for instance", or "however." Keep responses natural and relevant, with 2–3 supporting details.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For instance, cities have built more bike lanes in recent years, and weekend cycling groups have become common among young people.

× You're closer to them, that's true.

✓ I had one when I was a child.

The student's reply does not answer the examiner's question and uses pronouns incorrectly for the intended meaning. The question asks whether the student had a bike as a child (past possession). The original sentence 'You're closer to them, that's true.' is irrelevant and contains an unclear pronoun reference ('them'). Correct response should use past-tense verb and clear subject: 'I had one when I was a child.' Suggestion: respond directly to possession questions using 'I had' for past possession and avoid vague pronouns; if referring back to a noun, use a clear noun or a single pronoun with an obvious antecedent.

× But that's all trend.

✓ But that's just a trend.

The original sentence is grammatically awkward and uses 'all' incorrectly in this context. The intended meaning is that bikes being popular is a temporary or general trend; use 'just' to indicate that. 'But that's just a trend.' is a concise, natural sentence. Suggestion: use appropriate adverbs (just, only) with 'trend' and ensure collocations are correct ('just a trend' not 'all trend').