Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn: trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi ở câu chủ đề, tránh tiếng “um/uh” dư thừa, dùng câu ngắn gọn (không quá 5 câu). Sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, danh từ, động từ), dùng từ vựng chính xác (bike, afford, borrow, parents). Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: ai cho mượn, tần suất sử dụng) và dùng từ nối (because, so, therefore) để liên kết ý. Ví dụ sửa cụ thể: nêu rõ bạn không có xe, lý do tài chính của bố mẹ, bạn mượn xe ai và cảm nhận của bạn.

예시: I didn’t have my own bike as a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. Instead, I often borrowed bicycles from my friends or my cousins. I used their bikes to ride to school a few times a week, which I enjoyed because it felt freeing. Therefore I learned to be careful and responsible when using other people’s bikes.

제안: Phải trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) và giải thích rõ ràng bằng cấu trúc mạch lạc: dùng linking words như "because", "so", "for example". Chú ý ngữ pháp (I don’t think, instead of, bikes, people), và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: lý do tiện lợi, khoảng cách, thời tiết, giao thông công cộng). Giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu và tránh lặp từ. Có thể nêu một so sánh cụ thể giữa bike và motorbike/car.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorcycles or private cars. These vehicles are faster and more comfortable, especially for long distances or in hot weather. For example, commuters often choose motorbikes to avoid slow traffic and reach work on time. So bicycles are mainly used for leisure or short trips.

× Uh, winning words a choice.

✓ Uh, I don't understand that question.

The original is a nonsensical phrase; it lacks clear subject and verb agreement and does not respond to the examiner. Suggestion: use a simple, clear sentence to express confusion or ask for clarification, e.g. 'I don't understand that question.' This fixes sentence structure and gives a relevant reply.

× Umm, there's having a bias you always my cup of tea.

✓ Umm, having a bike was always my cup of tea.

Original mixes incorrect pronouns and auxiliary verbs ('there's having', 'a bias you always my cup of tea'). Replace with correct subject and verb: 'having a bike was always my cup of tea.' This fixes pronoun/auxiliary misuse and ensures subject-verb clarity.

× Uh, but my father's don't have ability to afford to buy an impasse expensive buy for me.

✓ But my father didn't have the ability to afford an expensive bike for me.

Errors: 'father's don't' incorrect contraction and plurality; tense and article problems. Correct by using singular subject 'father', past tense 'didn't have', proper article 'the' and noun 'bike'. This ensures subject-verb agreement and correct tense.

× Therefore I usually there's spend more time or borrows.

✓ Therefore I usually spent more time borrowing bikes.

Original 'there's spend' is incorrect; 'borrows' wrong form. Use past tense 'spent' and the gerund 'borrowing' after 'spent time'. This corrects verb forms and makes meaning clear.

× They buy from my friends and my relatives too.

✓ I borrowed them from my friends and relatives too.

Original 'They buy from' is wrong subject and tense. Use 'I borrowed them from' to match speaker and past narrative. This fixes pronoun reference and verb choice.

× I not think that because in my country there's instead of using bias, many people tend to prefer using those motorcycles or the private cars because it's more convenient and comfortable than bikes.

✓ I don't think so because in my country, instead of using bikes, many people prefer motorcycles or private cars because they are more convenient and comfortable than bikes.

Errors: 'I not think' should be 'I don't think'; 'there's instead of using bias' incorrect structure and 'bias' should be 'bikes'; 'those motorcycles or the private cars' awkward article use; 'it's' ambiguous pronoun. Corrections fix negation, noun choice, article use, and pronoun agreement.

× With this transport peoples can travel smoothly and travel everywhere destination they want without.

✓ With these forms of transport people can travel smoothly to any destination they want.

Errors: 'this transport' should be 'these forms of transport' or 'this type of transport'; 'peoples' incorrect plural noun; word order 'travel everywhere destination they want without' is ungrammatical. Correction uses 'people' (correct plural), 'any destination', and correct word order to produce a grammatical sentence.