Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Focus on natural phrasing, concise structure and accurate word choice. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct verbs and connective words. Avoid mistakes like “write it around” (use “ride it around”) and unnecessary repetition.

예시: Yes, I had a red bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for my eighth birthday, and I used to ride it around the neighbourhood almost every afternoon because it was fun and good exercise.

제안: Make the answer slightly more concise and correct small errors (e.g., “to get her to school” should be “to get to school”). Use linking words to add one specific example or a brief comparison. Keep to 2–4 sentences maximum for clarity and natural flow.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and practical for short trips. For example, many students and office workers ride bicycles to get to school or work, especially in city centres where traffic is heavy.

× I used to write it around the neighborhood almost every afternoon because it was fun and helped me exercise.

✓ I used to ride it around the neighborhood almost every afternoon because it was fun and helped me exercise.

The verb 'write' is incorrect in context; the intended action with a bike is 'ride'. This is a lexical error rather than a morphological -ing issue, but it involves using the wrong verb form. Replace 'write' with the base verb 'ride' to match the intended meaning. Suggestion: learn common collocations with 'bike' (ride a bike, cycle) to avoid using unrelated verbs. Note: The sentence's tense and structure are correct ('used to' for past habitual action).

× many students and office workers use bicycles to get her to school or work and you can see a lot of them in city centres.

✓ many students and office workers use bicycles to get to school or work and you can see a lot of them in city centres.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrect and likely a typo; the correct phrase is 'get to school or work'. 'Get to' uses the preposition 'to' after 'get' to indicate destination. This is a pronoun/preposition misuse. Suggestion: check subject references and common verb + preposition combinations (get to, go to) to prevent wrong pronoun insertion.