Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatically correct, more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense errors (use past tense), and add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep to under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was a child, and my grandfather taught me to ride it. I learned in about a week, and after that I rode it to visit friends and exercise every afternoon.

제안: Clarify your opinion with correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Give a concise reason and one specific example, and use linking words for coherence. Avoid unclear phrases like "white spaces" and incorrect subject-verb agreement.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in quieter residential areas where there is less traffic. For example, many people use bicycles to travel short distances in neighborhoods because cars and motorcycles dominate the main roads.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child and my grandfather taught me how to use it and as far as I remember I learned for about one week.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and my grandfather taught me how to use it. As far as I remember, I learned in about one week.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past context 'when I was a child', causing a subject-verb agreement / tense error (Grammar Problem Type ID 27 and 6). Use past tense 'had' to match 'was'. Also the original is a run-on sentence; split into two sentences and add commas for clarity. Replace 'for about one week' with 'in about one week' to correctly express the time taken to learn.

× Yes bikes are popular in our country specially on a white spaces like roads that has no plenty of motorcycles or vehicles because in our country there are more transportation like cars.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country, especially in wide spaces like roads that do not have many motorcycles or other vehicles, because we have more cars as transportation.

Multiple errors: Use comma after 'Yes' and 'especially'. 'On a white spaces' is incorrect — likely meant 'wide spaces', and the correct preposition is 'in wide spaces'. 'That has no plenty of motorcycles' is ungrammatical; use 'that do not have many motorcycles or other vehicles' to express scarcity. 'There are more transportation like cars' should be 'we have more cars as transportation' or 'cars are more common'. Overall corrections focus on prepositions, quantifier choice ('many' instead of 'plenty' in this structure), subject-verb agreement ('roads that do not have'), and word choice.