Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your tense consistent and give a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add one or two specific details (where you used it or who you rode with). Use linking words if you add details. Keep it to no more than five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day to visit my friends in the neighborhood, and I learned to do simple tricks in the local park.

제안: Answer directly and clearly, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use appropriate vocabulary and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas. Avoid unclear phrases and sentences that mix ideas; speak in simple, well-formed sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in China because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances. For example, many people commute to work or school by bike, especially in smaller cities where traffic is lighter and parking is limited.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

The student uses present tense 'have' with a past time reference 'when I was a kid'. This is a tense consistency error. Use past simple 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use past tense for actions or states that occurred in the past (I had, I went, I lived).

× Yes, bikes are very popular in China, so men visit to green from their homes to their work.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in China, so many people ride them from their homes to their workplaces.

Multiple problems: 'men' incorrectly limits to males and is unnatural here; 'visit to green' is ungrammatical and likely intended 'go by bike' or 'ride'; 'their work' should be 'their workplaces' or 'work'. This is mainly incorrect word choice and tense/verb form use. Suggestion: use 'many people' for general statements, 'ride' as the correct verb for bicycles, and 'workplaces' or 'work' as the destination. Maintain present simple for general facts.

× Though I do not have advice that's very dangerous since our main road isn't it by cheap things.

✓ However, I would not recommend it because it can be very dangerous; our main roads are narrow and crowded.

This sentence contains multiple errors: incorrect conjunction and discourse marker use ('Though' vs 'However'), wrong verb phrase 'do not have advice' (should be 'would not recommend'), unclear clause 'that's very dangerous' placement, and ungrammatical phrase 'isn't it by cheap things' which seems to attempt to describe road conditions. The main grammar problem is incorrect conjunction/transition and sentence structure. Suggestion: use appropriate connectors ('however', 'because'), clear verbs ('recommend'), and describe road conditions with correct adjectives and nouns ('main roads are narrow and crowded').