Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question directly, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words (e.g., "like"). Use past simple for past events and a short additional comment about why you felt that way.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I was afraid of going fast because I once fell while trying to ride, so my parents didn't buy me one. As a result, I learned to avoid bicycles and preferred walking instead.

제안: Answer directly, then give clear, specific reasons with linking words. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "rickshaw" or "auto-rickshaw" rather than unclear words) and correct grammar. Avoid hesitation sounds ("uh"). Provide a concise conclusion or comparison to strengthen the response.

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. In Bangladesh, many people prefer affordable three-wheeled vehicles such as auto-rickshaws for short trips, so bicycles are less common in cities. However, bicycles remain popular in rural areas where traffic is lighter and costs matter more.

× No, I didn't have any bike when I was on child because I was so afraid of like speed and I remember when I was a child I have tried once to ride a bicycle but I fall from the bicycle and.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was so afraid of speed. I remember once when I was a child I tried to ride a bicycle but I fell off it.

Errors: incorrect tense forms and some extra words. 'when I was on child' is incorrect preposition/phrase and should be 'when I was a child' (preposition error and phrase). 'I have tried once' uses present perfect incorrectly for a past completed single event; use simple past 'I tried'. 'I fall' should be past tense 'I fell'. Also 'any bike' is unnatural; use 'a bike' for singular countable noun. Suggestion: use simple past for past events, remove filler words like 'like', and use correct prepositions and verb forms.

× Actually I'm from Bangladesh and uh, bikes are not popular in my country because uh diksha is so affordable.

✓ Actually I'm from Bangladesh and bikes are not popular in my country because rickshaws are so affordable.

Error: word choice and possibly misspelling 'diksha' is unclear; likely meant 'rickshaw'. Also unnecessary filler 'uh'. Use correct noun and spelling. Preposition use 'in my country' is correct. Suggestion: replace unclear word with correct vehicle name and remove fillers.

× It's uh, like bike but it's 3 Wheeler and people are uh, considering it uh, a very cheap options.

✓ It's like a bike but it's a three-wheeler, and people consider it a very cheap option.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'bike' and 'three-wheeler'; numeral '3' should be written 'three' in formal speech. 'are considering it a very cheap options' has incorrect verb form and plural 'options' should be singular 'option' because 'it' refers to a single thing. Use simple present 'consider' for general truth. Remove filler words 'uh'. Suggestion: use correct articles, singular/plural agreement, and consistent present simple for general statements.

× That's why people are not.

✓ That's why people do not use bikes much.

Error: incomplete sentence lacking a main verb and object. 'people are not' is unfinished. Suggestion: complete the idea with an appropriate verb phrase such as 'do not use bikes much' or 'do not prefer bikes' to make a complete sentence.