Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers, correct verb tense and article use, and add one specific detail linked logically. Use one or two linking words (because/so) and keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a motorbike, but I did have a bicycle when I was a child because my school was far from home. Therefore I usually rode my bicycle to school every day, which took about twenty minutes each way.

제안: Begin with a clear statement, reduce hesitations, use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'bicycles' or 'motorbikes'), and support your opinion with one specific reason and a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make the answer coherent.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people ride to work or the market every day to avoid traffic and save money on fuel.

× No, I have no, uh, have bike, but I have a bicycle when I was a child, uh, because my school was far away from my home.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my school was far away from my home.

The student used present tense 'have' and awkward pronoun/word order. The question asked about the past, so use past tense 'didn't have'. Also simplify 'have bike' to 'have a bike' and remove redundant phrase. Suggestion: use correct past negative form 'didn't have' and include the article 'a'.

× So I used to, uh, ride bicycle, uh, for went to school.

✓ So I used to ride a bicycle to go to school.

The phrase combined 'used to' (habit in the past) with an incorrect structure 'for went'. After 'used to' use the base verb: 'used to ride'. Use the infinitive 'to go' or the preposition 'to' with the noun phrase 'to go to school' is incorrect; correct is 'to go to school' or simply 'to school'. Also include the article 'a bicycle'. Suggestion: say 'used to ride a bicycle to go to school' or 'used to ride a bicycle to school'.

× Yes umm, bikes are really popular in my country uh, in fact, uh, the umm, quantity of uh bikes as compared to another vehicle is more than uh, everyone has their own bike in my country uh, because it is a quick way.

✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country. In fact, the number of bikes compared to other vehicles is greater, and many people have their own bike because it is a quick way to travel.

Several problems: 'quantity of bikes as compared to another vehicle is more than' is ungrammatical and uses wrong comparatives and articles. Use 'number of bikes' (countable) and 'compared to other vehicles' (plural) and 'is greater' or 'is higher' for comparison. 'Everyone has their own bike' is an overgeneralization; 'many people' is more natural. Also 'it is a quick way' needs completion 'to travel'. Suggestion: simplify into two sentences and use 'number' and 'other vehicles' with correct comparative structure.