Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız çok kısa ve bilgi eksikliği var. Önce doğrudan soruyu yanıtlayıp ardından kısa bir açıklama veya anekdot ekleyin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak (for example, because, when) cümlenizi genişletin. Maksimum 3–4 cümle kullanın. Örneğin hangi yaşta, hangi tür bisikletti, bisikletiyle ilgili hatırladığınız bir anıyı veya neden sevdiğinizi belirtin.

예시: Yes, I did. I got a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. For example, I used to ride to my friend’s house every afternoon because it was faster than walking. That bike taught me a lot about balance and independence.

제안: Cevabınız belirsiz ve detay yok; kısa ret yerine görüşünüzü destekleyecek sebepler verin. Önce net bir cevap verin (Yes/No/Not really), sonra ‘because’ veya ‘however’ gibi bağlaçlarla sebepler, istatistik veya karşılaştırma ekleyin. 2–3 destekleyici cümle kullanarak daha ikna edici olun.

예시: Not really. Although some people use bicycles in cities, most prefer cars or motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient. However, cycling is becoming more common among young people who want to exercise or avoid traffic.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' uses the auxiliary did for past simple; the short affirmative answer should use 'Yes, I did' rather than repeating 'had'. Use 'did' to match the auxiliary in the question. Suggestion: answer with 'Yes, I did' or a full sentence like 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Not that much.

✓ Not very many.

The question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' asks about a plural noun (bikes). The reply 'Not that much' incorrectly uses 'much' which is used with uncountable nouns. For countable plural nouns use 'many' or quantifiers like 'not very many' or rephrase 'Not very popular.' Suggestion: say 'Not very many' or 'They're not very popular.'