Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự câu, dùng thì quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ, tránh lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ "side" không đúng). Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết ngắn gọn (tối đa 5 câu) với liên từ khi cần thiết. Cụ thể: dùng "Yes, I did" hoặc "Yes, I had a bike"; mô tả ngắn nơi chốn, tần suất, và cảm xúc/ý nghĩa của việc có xe đạp.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood almost every day, and it was my favorite way to play with friends. Because it was easy to use and fun, I felt very independent whenever I cycled.

제안: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp (thiếu động từ "are" sau "actually"), dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: đưa ý chính trước rồi giải thích; dùng liên từ để nối ý; cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: các lý do, nơi thấy nhiều xe đạp hoặc nhóm tuổi). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, dùng thì hiện tại để nói về hiện trạng.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many parents teach their children to cycle from a young age, so you often see children riding bikes in parks and streets. Additionally, cycling is a common and inexpensive way to travel short distances, which makes it widely used.

× Yes, of course, I have a bike I usually side around my home when I was a little child.

✓ Yes, of course, I had a bike. I usually rode around my home when I was a little child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past-time reference 'when I was a little child', causing a tense inconsistency. Also 'side' is incorrect verb choice; the past tense of 'ride' is 'rode'. Use past simple consistently for past habits. Suggestion: use 'had' for possession in the past and 'rode' for the action (I usually rode around...). Also split into two sentences or use a conjunction for clarity.

× It actually popular in my country because when I was a little child a lot of people teach their children how to cycle bikes and that's why I think it's popular.

✓ It is actually popular in my country because when I was a little child a lot of people taught their children how to ride bikes, and that's why I think it's popular.

The clause 'It actually popular' is missing the present simple auxiliary verb 'is'. The sentence also mixes past time ('when I was a little child') with present-tense 'teach'; use past tense 'taught' to match the time frame. 'Cycle bikes' is nonnative phrasing; use 'ride bikes'. Keep 'is' for the general present statement and use past tense for actions that occurred in the past.