Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly in past tense and avoid repeating the examiner's question. Give a short topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (when you got it, how often you rode, or what you used it for). Keep responses concise (no more than 4–5 sentences) and use linking words like 'so' or 'because' for coherence.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and used it almost every day to ride to school and to play with friends. Because our house was near a park, I often rode there after lessons, which helped me become more confident on the road.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give specific reasons and a brief example. Reduce hesitation words (uh) and repetitions. Use linking words such as 'because', 'for example', or 'also' to connect ideas. Aim for natural vocabulary (e.g., 'commute' instead of repeating 'to').

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and leisure. For example, as a child I rode my bike to school and tuition classes every day, and even today I see lots of children and students cycling in my neighborhood.

× Do you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The examiner asked a past question ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Do you have' is present tense and mismatches the time reference. Use the past simple 'Did you have' to match 'when you were a child'. Suggestion: Match the verb tense to the time phrase; for past time expressions use past simple (Did you have...).

× I used to ride bike uh, daily.

✓ I used to ride a bike daily.

In English, the countable noun 'bike' needs an article when singular. Omitting the article is incorrect. Use 'a bike' for one bike or 'bikes' for plural. Suggestion: Use 'a' before singular countable nouns (a bike) or plural form if referring to bikes in general (ride bikes).

× That was uh, my commute to my school, uh, to my uh, tuition classes and even uh, uh, even now I see many young kids in my neighborhood riding bikes.

✓ That was my commute to school and to my tuition classes, and even now I see many young kids in my neighborhood riding bikes.

The sentence is wordy and has redundant fillers ('uh', 'my school', repeated 'even'). 'My school' is acceptable but 'to school' is more natural for daily commute. Also punctuation and conjunction use needed fixing to connect the two ideas clearly. Suggestion: Remove filler words, avoid repetition, use parallel structure ('to school and to my tuition classes') and join clauses with 'and' for clarity.