Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, of course. I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it with my brother almost every weekend and I remember that we fairly love to exploring the neighborhood together. And I still remember that my my that my bike was bright blue and had a little bell that I liked showing it.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Good job! - You answered the question directly and gave a reason (convenience and speed) and a current use (children/recreation). That shows task response and relevance. - Your vocabulary is appropriate and you used linking to contrast past and present. Improvement suggestions: - Make sentences more concise and grammatically correct.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 68.0제안: Be more concise and correct grammar; avoid repetition and improve word choice and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense/verb forms and remove duplicate words.
예시: Yes — I had a bright blue bike when I was a child. I used to ride it with my brother almost every weekend, and we loved exploring the neighborhood together. It had a small bell that I enjoyed showing to my friends.
문법
× I used to ride it with my brother almost every weekend and I remember that we fairly love to exploring the neighborhood together.
✓ I used to ride it with my brother almost every weekend and I remember that we fairly loved exploring the neighborhood together.
The verb 'love' should be in past tense 'loved' to match 'remember' referring to past habitual action; also 'to exploring' is incorrect after 'love' which should be followed by a base form or gerund depending on structure. In this sentence, 'loved exploring' (verb + -ing) is correct. Suggestion: use 'loved exploring' for past habitual enjoyment.
× And I still remember that my my that my bike was bright blue and had a little bell that I liked showing it.
✓ I still remember that my bike was bright blue and had a little bell that I liked to show.
The sentence contains repeated words 'my my that my' which is redundant and ungrammatical. Also the clause 'that I liked showing it' incorrectly repeats the object 'it' after the relative clause; use the infinitive 'to show' with object understood or write 'that I liked to show to others.' Suggestion: remove duplicates and use 'liked to show' or 'liked showing it to others.'
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