Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be natural and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid tense mistakes and redundant phrasing, and add one brief specific detail using a linking word. Use correct past simple rather than past perfect when referring to childhood facts.

예시: No, I didn't. My parents encouraged me to learn, but I only learned to ride when I was 13 because we lived far from neighbors and had little space to practice.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with a specific comparison and one reason using a linking word. Avoid filler words and unnecessary hesitations, and use the article name correctly ('the Netherlands').

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, but not as much as in the Netherlands. For example, in Amsterdam many people cycle daily because the city is flat and has excellent bike lanes.

× No, I hadn't, but my parents wanted so much for me to understand how to ride a bike, but unfortunately I really learned that only at the age of 13.

✓ No, I didn't, but my parents wanted me to learn how to ride a bike, and unfortunately I only learned it at the age of 13.

The student used 'I hadn't' which is incorrect for a past simple negative answer about possession; 'didn't have' or 'I didn't' is appropriate. 'Wanted so much for me to understand how to ride a bike' is awkward and incorrectly uses 'understand'; 'wanted me to learn how to ride a bike' is clearer. Also combine clauses with 'and' rather than repeating 'but' since the second clause expresses a consequence. Ensure verb tenses are consistent in past simple: 'wanted' and 'learned'.

× Yeah, I guess they are. But I think that in, for instance, in Netherlands, in Amsterdam especially, they are way more popular than in my, uh, country.

✓ Yeah, I guess they are. But I think that, for instance, in the Netherlands, especially in Amsterdam, they are much more popular than in my country.

Use the definite article with country names like 'the Netherlands' (article error/category 17 but listed as preposition-type here because of prepositional phrasing); remove the extra 'in' after 'for instance' and place 'especially in Amsterdam' correctly. 'Way more' is informal; 'much more' is more appropriate. Also drop filler 'uh' and the unnecessary comma before 'country'.