Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không phù hợp thì quá khứ. Nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng thì quá khứ, thêm câu chủ đề rõ ràng và một vài chi tiết hỗ trợ (một đến hai câu), dùng liên từ nếu cần để làm rõ. Tránh sự lặp lại và phát âm không chính xác.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old. It was my favorite toy because it gave me freedom to ride around the neighborhood, and I practiced riding every afternoon until I was confident.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngôn ngữ, phát âm và trật tự từ sai. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, theo sau bằng lý do cụ thể và ví dụ; sử dụng các liên từ (because, for example, therefore) để tạo kết nối logic. Giữ độ dài 2–4 câu, dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "popular", "common", "commute".

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances and avoid traffic. For example, students and young workers often ride bicycles to school or work, and some cities have bike-sharing systems that make cycling convenient.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense. The student answered with a present tense response ('I do'), which is a tense mismatch. Use the past tense 'I did' to match the question. Suggestion: respond with past tense when the question uses 'did' or refers to past time (e.g., 'Yes, I did', 'Yes, I had one').

× Yes, of course by uh buys us more popular in my country.

✓ Yes, of course bikes are more popular in my country.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains several issues: incorrect words ('by uh buys us') and wrong word order. The intended meaning is that bicycles are popular, so the correct structure is 'bikes are more popular in my country.' This uses the correct subject 'bikes', the verb 'are' (present tense) and a clear comparative phrase. Suggestion: remove filler sounds, use correct subject and verb order, and keep sentences simple and clear (e.g., 'Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.').