Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify the main idea, correct mistakes, and be concise. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question (e.g. “No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.”). Avoid slip-ups (you said “bag”) and unnecessary repetition. If you expand, add one short supporting detail using a linking phrase (e.g. “because” or “so”) and keep to two or three sentences total. Pronunciation and fluency should be steady and natural.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I only learned to ride when I was a teenager because my family couldn’t afford one earlier, so I used public transport to get around.

제안: Good direct answer and relevant reasons. Improve naturalness and grammar: use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer phrasing (e.g. “they” → “people” or “many people”), and add a linking word to structure the reason. Keep the response to two or three concise sentences and include a specific example or short comparison to strengthen your point.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. For example, in the mornings you can see dedicated bike lanes full of commuters, and others ride for exercise on weekends.

× No, I didn't have a bag when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student's response uses 'bag' but the examiner asked about a 'bike'; this is a lexical error rather than grammar. However, keeping tense consistent, the past simple 'didn't have' is correct for a past situation. Replace 'bag' with 'bike' to answer the question accurately. Suggestion: Listen carefully to the question and use vocabulary that matches the topic. Read the question first and repeat key words in your answer to stay on topic.

× Honestly I don't even have my first bike yet.

✓ Honestly, I still don't have my first bike.

The student uses present simple negative 'don't even have' with 'yet', which is acceptable in informal speech, but 'still don't have' is a more natural collocation in this context. Also add a comma after 'Honestly' for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'still' with present simple to express that a situation continues up to now. Include small pauses or commas when starting a sentence with an adverb like 'Honestly'.

× Yes, I can say that bikes are popular in my country because it's one of their main mode of transportation whenever they go to work, school or when they exercise.

✓ Yes, I would say that bikes are popular in my country because they are one of the main modes of transportation when people go to work, to school, or exercise.

Multiple grammar issues: 'it's one of their main mode' mixes singular and plural and uses an unclear pronoun 'their'. This is a subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference problem (IDs 27 and 12), and 'mode' should be plural 'modes' to match 'one of the'. Also 'their' is ambiguous; replace with 'people' and use 'they are' to agree with plural 'modes'. Simplify 'whenever they go to work, school or when they exercise' to 'when people go to work, to school, or exercise' to avoid redundant 'when'. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns clearly refer to a noun (use 'people' instead of 'their'), match singular/plural forms ('one of the main modes'), and keep parallel structure in lists ('to work, to school, or exercise').