Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer directly addresses the question and gives a clear reason, which is good. To improve, make the response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy (e.g., "any bike" and "that's why") and correct small grammar/inaccuracy ("18 plus" → "18 or older"; "drive any bike" → "ride a motorcycle"). Use one or two linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. My parents didn't allow me to ride one because, under Indian regulations, you must be 18 or older to ride a motorcycle, so I had to wait until I was an adult.

제안: You answer the question and give reasons, but the language is awkward and some verb forms are incorrect ("used to" is inappropriate here). Improve coherence by using linking words (for example, "because" and "therefore") and add a specific detail or brief example (e.g., fuel efficiency, parking convenience). Aim for clearer vocabulary and smoother sentence structures.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap to buy and run, and they help people avoid traffic. For example, many students and office workers ride motorcycles to save time and money, and parking is much easier than for cars.

× When I was a child, I didn't have any bike and moreover my parents didn't allow me to ride a bike because there are certain regulations in India that you should be 18 plus to drive any bike.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike and, moreover, my parents didn't allow me to ride one because there are certain regulations in India that you must be 18 or older to drive a bike.

The phrase 'any bike' is unnatural with the negative 'didn't have' in this context; use the singular count noun 'a bike' or the pronoun 'one'. Also 'you should be 18 plus' is informal and ungrammatical; use modal 'must' or 'have to' and the phrase '18 or older'. Added commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'a bike' for singular possession and 'one' to avoid repetition, and replace 'should be 18 plus' with 'must be 18 or older'.

× Yes, I think bikes are much popular in my country because nowadays people used to commute to their workplaces or either.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because nowadays people commute to their workplaces.

'Are much popular' is incorrect adjective modifier; use 'very popular' or 'quite popular'. The use of 'used to' is incorrect for current habitual actions; use simple present 'commute'. The fragment 'or either' is incorrect and unnecessary. Suggestion: use 'very popular' and simple present for current habits, and remove redundant fragments.

× I would say that they used to go to their schools or colleges through bike and it is considered as one of the cheapest modes of transportation as compared to any other public transport.

✓ I would say that they used to go to their schools or colleges by bike, and it was considered one of the cheapest modes of transportation compared with other public transport.

'Through bike' is wrong preposition; use 'by bike' (preposition error also). 'It is considered' mixes present with past 'used to'; change to past 'was considered' to match 'used to'. 'As compared to any other public transport' is wordy; use 'compared with other public transport'. Suggestion: use 'by bike' for travel mode, maintain consistent past tense when describing past habits, and simplify comparative phrasing.