Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (verb tenses and articles), simplify and make sentences natural and concise, and add one specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a brief supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition (e.g., "blue colour").

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my father bought for me when I was six, and I used it to ride to the park every weekend.

제안: Correct grammar and pronunciation, remove fillers, and make the reason more specific. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example") and provide one concrete example or fact about cycling in your country.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in Singapore because the government promotes cycling to reduce pollution; for example, there are many dedicated cycling paths and bike-sharing schemes in the city.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about possession in the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student should use past tense 'had' rather than present tense 'have'. Use past simple to match the time reference.

× When I were a child the colour is blue colour because my favorite colour is blue and then this is brought from my father.

✓ When I was a child, the colour was blue because my favorite colour was blue, and it was bought for me by my father.

Several past-tense and verb form errors: 'were' should be 'was' (subject 'I' requires singular past 'was'); 'is' should be 'was' to maintain past tense; 'this is brought from my father' is incorrect passive/tense and word choice — use 'it was bought for me by my father' (past passive) to indicate the bike was purchased in the past. Also add commas for clarity.

× Yeah, I think buy are popular in my country because I live in Singapore and this is for uh, this country is for uh, is uh, focus on go green.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because I live in Singapore, and this country focuses on going green.

Multiple issues: 'buy' is incorrect — should be 'bikes' (plural noun). 'This country is for... is... focus on go green' has verb form errors: use 'this country focuses' (third person singular present) and the gerund 'going green' after 'focus on'. Also remove filler words and improve word order.

× Therefore bike is a good one.

✓ Therefore, bikes are a good choice.

Singular/plural and article issues: 'bike is a good one' is awkward and mismatches earlier plural 'bikes'; use 'bikes are a good choice' to make the statement general. Add a comma after 'Therefore'.