Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (verb tenses and articles), reduce redundancy, and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms (use past tense consistently), use articles where needed, and avoid unrelated or awkward phrases (e.g. "develop quite strong long legs").

예시: Yes, I did. I used to ride my bike to school every day for about 10 kilometres, so I got plenty of exercise and became quite fit. Because it was cheap and reliable, I really appreciated having it; it also saved me money on transport.

제안: Clarify and organize the response, fix grammar and vocabulary, and use linking words. Avoid filler words like "uh". Compare clearly with cars, and give a specific example or brief reason to support your opinion. Correct awkward phrases (e.g. "contrasted area") to clearer terms like "rural areas" or "crowded city streets."

예시: Yes, I think they are very popular. Bicycles, scooters and motorbikes are common because they are cheap, fuel-efficient and easy to park, especially in crowded city streets. For example, many commuters prefer scooters for short trips since cars are expensive and parking is difficult.

× Yes I did. I use it to try my bike to school about 10 kilometers a day, so I got plenty of exercise and develop quite strong long legs. I really appreciated having it because it kept me fit.

✓ Yes, I did. I used it to ride my bike to school for about 10 kilometers a day, so I got plenty of exercise and developed quite strong legs. I really appreciated having it because it kept me fit.

Errors: present tense 'use' should be past 'used' because the question asks about childhood (past). 'to try my bike' is incorrect collocation; use 'to ride my bike'. 'develop' should be past 'developed' to match past narration. 'long legs' is odd; 'quite strong legs' or just 'strong legs' is better; I removed 'long' to correct meaning. Suggestions: maintain past tense throughout when talking about past events, use correct verb collocations (ride a bike), and ensure verbs agree in tense with the time reference.

× Yes, bicycles, scooters and motorbikes are very common in my country because they are cheap and convenient and easy to park uh than cars.

✓ Yes, bicycles, scooters and motorbikes are very common in my country because they are cheap, convenient and easier to park than cars.

Errors: repetition 'and convenient and easy' is awkward; combine with commas. Comparison phrase 'easy to park than cars' is ungrammatical: use comparative 'easier to park than cars'. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestions: use comparatives for comparisons (easier than), keep parallel structure when listing adjectives, and eliminate filler words in formal speech.

× We rarely see many cars on contrasted area.

✓ We rarely see many cars in less developed (or less crowded) areas.

Errors: 'on contrasted area' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended meaning is areas that contrast with cities, e.g. 'less developed areas' or 'rural areas' or 'less crowded areas'. Preposition 'on' is incorrect; use 'in' with 'areas'. Suggestions: choose appropriate noun phrase (rural areas, less developed areas, or suburban areas) and use correct preposition 'in'. Maintain clarity by selecting the correct adjective to express contrast.