Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak more clearly and use correct grammar and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, say you had a bike, describe it (color, style), explain how you got it and why it was special, using connectors such as “and”, “because” or “so”. Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bicycle with a basket, which was my favorite color as a child. My parents gave it to me for my sixth birthday, and I loved riding it to the park every weekend because it made me feel independent.

제안: Correct vocabulary and word order, and add a clear reason with a linking word. Begin with a direct answer, then give one or two specific reasons or examples using connectors like “because”, “for example” or “so”. Use the correct word “bike(s)” and pay attention to plural forms and verb agreement.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people cycle on weekends to visit parks and natural areas. For example, whole families often ride together to lakes or green spaces for exercise and relaxation.

× Yes I had bike the color was pink.

✓ Yes, I had a bike; the color was pink.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before singular count noun 'bike' (Article errors). Also add punctuation to separate clauses. Suggestion: use 'a' with singular countable nouns and add a comma after 'Yes'.

× That was my favorite color when I was child and I got from give my birthday.

✓ That was my favorite color when I was a child, and I got it for my birthday.

Missing definite/indefinite article 'a' before 'child' and incorrect verb phrase 'got from give' (Article errors and sentence structure). Also missing object 'it' and wrong preposition 'from' should be 'for'. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'child', add 'it' as the object, and use 'for my birthday' to express receiving as a gift.

× My parents gave me more experience.

✓ My parents gave me more opportunities to ride and gain experience.

Original sentence is vague and likely incorrect in context; 'gave me more experience' is unnatural. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue. Suggestion: specify what parents provided (opportunities, time, support) and use 'to ride and gain experience' to clarify meaning.

× Yes, I think bag is popular in my country because everyone on weekends always cycling go to natural space or open space.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because, on weekends, everyone always goes cycling to natural or open spaces.

Multiple errors: 'bag' is incorrect noun (word choice) and missing plural form 'bikes' (Singular and plural issue), missing definite article and incorrect word order. Pronoun/verb agreement: 'everyone... goes' requires third person singular verb. Preposition use: 'to natural space or open space' should be 'to natural or open spaces'. Suggestion: use correct noun 'bikes', pluralize and use 'goes cycling' with 'to' plus plural 'spaces'.