Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify and simplify your response while correcting grammar and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Use correct verb forms, possessive pronouns, and appropriate nouns (e.g., 'bike' not 'pie'). Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences and use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small pink bike when I was six, and I loved riding it. I often rode it to school because it was fun and convenient.

제안: Give a clear opinion, then support it with two specific reasons connected by linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., 'in the countryside', 'ride bikes', 'to work or to school') and use precise vocabulary about benefits (convenient, cheap, good for the environment). Limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas. Many people ride bikes to work or school because they are cheap and convenient, and they can avoid traffic. Moreover, using bikes helps reduce air pollution, so they are good for the environment.

× When I was a child my parent spoke to me a pie.

✓ When I was a child my parents gave me a bike.

Original sentence has multiple errors: 'parent' should be plural 'parents' if referring to both, but context likely needs plural 'parents' or singular with 'my parent gave me'. 'spoke to me a pie' is incorrect verb and object choice. The intended meaning is receiving a bicycle, so use 'gave me a bike'. Use 'gave' (past tense) because the action happened in the past. Suggestion: identify the intended subject number and use the appropriate noun and verb collocation ('give someone something').

× I very love it.

✓ I loved it very much.

'Love' in past context should be past tense 'loved'. Adverb placement: 'very' cannot directly modify 'love' this way; use 'very much' after the verb. Suggestion: match tense to the narrative and place adverbs properly: 'I loved it very much.'

× It's had pink colors and I often brightest in to go to school.

✓ It was pink, and I often rode it to go to school.

Multiple issues: 'It's had' is wrong; use past 'It was' or 'It had' depending on meaning — 'It was pink' is idiomatic. 'colors' unnecessary; 'pink' as adjective sufficient. 'I often brightest in to go to school' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I often rode it to school.' Use past tense 'rode' for 'ride' and include object 'it'. Suggestion: simplify description and use correct past tense and verb-object order: 'It was pink, and I often rode it to school.'

× In my countryside most people ride their bike to work out to school because but it's very convenient and people can go and everywhere you want.

✓ In my countryside most people ride their bikes to work or to school because it is very convenient and people can go wherever they want.

Errors: 'my countryside' is odd but acceptable; 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match 'most people'. Remove 'work out to school' — use 'to work or to school'. 'because but' is a contradictory pair; choose one ('because'). 'it's' should be expanded to 'it is' for clarity. 'go and everywhere you want' is ungrammatical; use 'go wherever they want'. Suggestion: ensure plural agreement, remove contradictory conjunctions, and use correct relative words like 'wherever'.

× All those pie can help environment less polluted.

✓ All those bikes can help make the environment less polluted.

'pie' is wrong word; should be 'bikes'. 'All those' is acceptable to refer to many bikes. Need verb phrase 'help make' to indicate causation. 'environment' needs the definite article 'the environment'. 'less polluted' is fine but attach to noun phrase. Suggestion: choose correct nouns, include necessary auxiliary verbs, and use articles with common nouns: 'help make the environment less polluted.'