Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct but too short and repetitive. Improve by giving a clearer topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details (e.g., age you got the bike, how you used it, a memory). Use a linking word to connect ideas and keep the response to no more than 4–5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about seven and used it every day to ride to the park and visit friends. Because the neighborhood was safe, I learned to ride confidently within a few weeks, and I still remember how proud I felt after my first long ride.

제안: The reply answers the question but lacks specific reasons or examples. Improve by giving one or two reasons why bikes are popular (e.g., cost, environment, traffic) and a linking word to show cause or contrast. Keep it concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap to run and help people avoid traffic. For example, many students and commuters cycle short distances, and some cities have introduced bike-sharing schemes to encourage more people to choose cycling.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses past simple tense to answer a question about the past and has correct subject-verb agreement and articles.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses present simple tense to state a general belief and has correct subject-verb agreement and plural noun use.