Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: The student simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For full marks, respond directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no + brief detail), then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Keep the answer natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every weekend. Because the streets were quiet, I quickly learned to balance and felt very independent.

제안: The answer addresses the question directly and provides reasons, but it has a few grammatical errors and could be more natural and specific. Improve by using correct grammar (e.g., "they are" or "cycling is"), adding a linking word for flow, and giving a concrete example or brief comparison to strengthen the point. Keep it within five sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable way to travel short distances, and cycling also benefits your health. For example, many people commute to work by bike in cities where traffic is heavy. Moreover, local councils have built bike lanes recently, which has encouraged even more people to cycle.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question, creating a sentence structure error (ID 26). As an answer to a past-tense yes/no question, use a past-tense statement rather than repeating the question form. Use 'I had' to state possession in the past. Suggestion: respond directly with a past-tense declarative sentence or a short 'Yes, I did.'

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because it's a cheap way to get from point A to point B and it also great for your health because it improves your cardiovascular system and it's free.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are a cheap way to get from point A to point B, they are also great for your health because they improve your cardiovascular system, and they are free to use.

Multiple issues fall under sentence structure errors (ID 26) and subject-verb agreement (ID 27). The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to 'bikes' (plural) so use 'they' and 'are' rather than 'it' and omitted 'are' ('it also great' is missing the verb). Also avoid repeating 'because' unnecessarily; connect clauses with commas and conjunctions for clarity. Suggestion: match plural subject 'bikes' with plural pronouns and verbs, ensure each clause has a verb, and join ideas smoothly.