Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a full, natural response: start with a clear topic sentence and add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid one-word answers. Mention when you had it, how you used it, and a brief feeling or result.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old. I used it every day to ride to school and play with my friends, and it helped me feel independent and active.

제안: Provide a clearer topic sentence, correct grammar, and add a specific reason or example with a linking word. Use proper verb forms and a linking phrase (for example, because/so/for instance).

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and shopping. For example, in cities you often see people cycling to work since it is cheaper and faster than driving in traffic.

× I think yes, because a lot of people using a bike.

✓ I think so, because a lot of people use bikes.

The original sentence uses the -ing form 'using' without an auxiliary, which is ungrammatical here. According to the list, this is a 'Verb + -ing form' issue (ID 8). The context is a general statement about habits, so the simple present tense 'use' is required. Also 'a lot of people' requires the plural noun 'bikes' rather than 'a bike.' Replace 'yes' with the more natural response 'so.' Suggestion: use simple present for habitual/general truths ('people use bikes'), and avoid using -ing without auxiliary unless forming a continuous tense ('are using').