Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn cần trả lời đúng vào câu hỏi và giữ độ chính xác ngôn ngữ. Cụ thể: (1) Trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề liên quan tới 'bike' thay vì 'bag'. (2) Sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, danh từ số ít/đếm được, tính từ). (3) Giữ câu ngắn gọn, không quá 5 câu, và thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tuổi khi có xe, kỷ niệm đi xe). (4) Dùng từ vựng chính xác (pink thay vì kidding pink; loved rather than love nếu nói về quá khứ).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight. It was a small pink bicycle that my grandfather gave me for my birthday, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood. I remember practicing how to balance until I could ride without help.

제안: Bạn nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, từ nối phù hợp. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng 'They used to be...' hoặc 'Bicycles used to be...'; (2) Sửa cấu trúc câu để tránh mâu thuẫn (motorbikes and cars); (3) Thêm một ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể (chi phí, hạ tầng, thời gian). (4) Dùng liên từ hợp lý để mạch lạc (however, nowadays, because).

예시: Bicycles used to be very popular in my country, especially among students and workers, because they were cheap and convenient. However, nowadays they are less common since more people can afford motorbikes or cars, so bicycles are mainly used for exercise or leisure activities at parks.

× I did have a bag when I was in primary school.

✓ I did have a bike when I was in primary school.

The student answered a question about a bike but wrote 'bag'. This is a vocabulary mistake rather than grammar, but it affects agreement between the subject of the conversation and the object mentioned. Replace 'bag' with 'bike' to match the question context and meaning. Suggestion: Read the question carefully and ensure the noun matches the topic.

× It was a kidding pink and I love it very much because it's a gift from my grandpa as my birthday gift.

✓ It was a kind pink bike and I loved it very much because it was a gift from my grandpa for my birthday.

Errors: 'kidding pink' is incorrect adjective choice and order; 'kidding' is wrong form and meaning. Use 'kind' is also not ideal—better is 'light pink' or 'pretty pink'. Tense consistency: student started in past (It was...) so 'I loved' and 'it was' should be past. 'as my birthday gift' is awkward; use 'for my birthday.' Suggestion: Use appropriate adjective for color (e.g. 'light pink'), keep past tense consistently when talking about childhood, and use 'for my birthday' to express purpose.

× But used to be very popular in my country, many people rely on them as everyday transport.

✓ Bikes used to be very popular in my country; many people relied on them as everyday transport.

The sentence lacks a subject before 'used to be' and mixes past expressions with present tense 'rely.' Use 'Bikes used to be' to include the subject and change 'rely' to past 'relied' for tense consistency when referring to the past. Suggestion: Start with the subject ('Bikes') and keep verbs in the past when describing past situations.

× Nowadays they are less common because more people own motorbikes in car, so bicycles are mainly used for exercises or leisure.

✓ Nowadays they are less common because more people own motorbikes or cars, so bicycles are mainly used for exercise or leisure.

Errors: 'motorbikes in car' is incorrect — likely meant 'motorbikes or cars.' 'Exercises' as a noun is incorrect in this context; use 'exercise' (uncountable). The rest is correct present tense describing current situation. Suggestion: Use 'or' between alternatives, and use uncountable noun 'exercise' for general activity.