Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答過於簡短且語法錯誤。首先要直接回答問題並給出主題句，然後補充具體細節（例如你幾歲開始有、那輛自行車的樣子、你如何使用它、與誰一起騎等）。注意主語與動詞的正確使用，句子最好不要超過五句，並用連接詞使表述連貫。例："Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was six years old and it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. I often rode it to the park near my home with my older brother. Riding that bike helped me learn balance and made me feel independent."

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was six years old and it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. I used to ride it to the nearby park almost every afternoon with my friend. Learning to ride taught me confidence and became one of my fondest childhood memories.

제안: 你的回答太簡短且沒有情報性。應該先給出直接立場（肯定或否定），然後用具體理由或例子支持你的觀點，例如城市自行車道、通勤使用、休閒活動或共享單車的普及。使用連接詞（because, for example, therefore）使表述更有條理。例："Yes, bikes are popular because many people use them to commute and there are lots of bike-sharing services."

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in big cities there are extensive bike lanes and several bike-sharing schemes, which makes cycling convenient and affordable.

× Man six years old.

✓ I was six years old.

句子缺少主语和动词，原句只包含名词和数字片段，不能构成完整句子。应根据提问“Did you have a bike when you were a child?”使用过去时和第一人称，完整表达为“I was six years old.”。建议在回答年龄时包含主语+系动词(be)+年龄，例如“I was six years old”或更口语的“When I was six.”，以保证句子完整。